Well done, you have created a successful presentation which was appropriate for your pitch that conveyed your proposal to rebrand a Unilever product to a new audience.
You have been awarded the following grades and should make the suggested improvements:
Unit 2: P1 You have conducted research into Unilever and successfully translated that to your presentation. However, you need to look at the BARB again as they won't 'help you' as such. You also need to include details on the ASA and Ofcom and link them to the appropriateness of your advert and how it would be suitable (or not).
Unit 2: P2 You need to correct the spelling errors in this presentation as there are far too many (it shows you might not have checked and practiced it!) The content is good and if you add details on the ASA and Ofcom, you will get a merit.
Unit 2: P4 You have created a solid Prezi and this is a great way to present a media proposal. However, there is too much text on the presentation and there are also various spelling errors. You also need to add some more images to make it more visually exciting.
Unit 2: M5 You read a little too much from the presentation to begin with and had to restart because of a technical problem (which was not your fault). You relaxed more throughout and made good eye-contact later on. You steadily improved through the presentation and were speaking far more fluently towards the end. You will need to re-pitch if you want to aim for D5.
Jamie,
ReplyDeleteWell done, you have created a successful presentation which was appropriate for your pitch that conveyed your proposal to rebrand a Unilever product to a new audience.
You have been awarded the following grades and should make the suggested improvements:
Unit 2: P1
You have conducted research into Unilever and successfully translated that to your presentation. However, you need to look at the BARB again as they won't 'help you' as such. You also need to include details on the ASA and Ofcom and link them to the appropriateness of your advert and how it would be suitable (or not).
Unit 2: P2
You need to correct the spelling errors in this presentation as there are far too many (it shows you might not have checked and practiced it!) The content is good and if you add details on the ASA and Ofcom, you will get a merit.
Unit 2: P4
You have created a solid Prezi and this is a great way to present a media proposal. However, there is too much text on the presentation and there are also various spelling errors. You also need to add some more images to make it more visually exciting.
Unit 2: M5
You read a little too much from the presentation to begin with and had to restart because of a technical problem (which was not your fault). You relaxed more throughout and made good eye-contact later on. You steadily improved through the presentation and were speaking far more fluently towards the end. You will need to re-pitch if you want to aim for D5.
Great start Jamie,
EllieB
Bit more needed on BCAP code - find some specific bits relevant to your ad. Watch spelling.
ReplyDeleteJust about enough for merit now with the BCAP code addition. Well done.
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