Creating a character BBC writers page

 This part of a script was taken from the BBC writers room page. The script has used outer presence to introduce the character. This is done by it giving the reader the impression that the lady is upset and angry, that is why she is trying to take of her wedding ring for some reason. we also get detail of how she looks by her swollen red fingers. The text gradually goes into inner presence as it reveals that the lady is Diana Manning. we also find out her location and who is with her. It finally ends up by it telling us her feelings.