You have made a good start here but some sections are really brief and underdeveloped. I have awarded a pass but you still need to go through the presentation and add: - specific details on how satellite and cable reach homes - details on interactivity - details on the result of consumer products - what has it meant for people buying the technology?
Make these changes and you will be looking at a merit.
Jamie,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here but some sections are really brief and underdeveloped. I have awarded a pass but you still need to go through the presentation and add:
- specific details on how satellite and cable reach homes
- details on interactivity
- details on the result of consumer products - what has it meant for people buying the technology?
Make these changes and you will be looking at a merit.
EllieB
Now a merit but still some niggly errors - clean them up NOW!!!
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